Comments on: 9/19/09: Freebie! http://dailypoetryclub.com/hello-world/ A poem a day keeps the mind at play. Thu, 09 Sep 2010 19:43:34 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: TREVOR http://dailypoetryclub.com/hello-world/comment-page-1/#comment-46 TREVOR Wed, 23 Sep 2009 03:59:34 +0000 http:/?p=1#comment-46 I can never dream in color but my friend she always does Says her dreams are more like movies and she watches just because Sunday mornings give the future tuesday's daydreams mark the past Any thing to her is everything nothing's ever white and black I can never dream
in color
but my friend
she always does
Says her dreams are more
like movies
and she watches just because
Sunday mornings
give the future
tuesday’s daydreams mark
the past
Any thing to her is everything
nothing’s ever white and black

Like or Dislike: Thumb up Thumb down 0

]]> By: J. Edwin http://dailypoetryclub.com/hello-world/comment-page-1/#comment-7 J. Edwin Sun, 20 Sep 2009 15:36:38 +0000 http:/?p=1#comment-7 Sitting there with your phony smile Knowing the joke is on me Your mouth says I did a good job But tips speak louder than words So I will kill you. Sitting there with your phony smile
Knowing the joke is on me
Your mouth says I did a good job
But tips speak louder than words

So I will kill you.

Like or Dislike: Thumb up Thumb down +3

]]> By: Russell http://dailypoetryclub.com/hello-world/comment-page-1/#comment-6 Russell Sat, 19 Sep 2009 23:05:43 +0000 http:/?p=1#comment-6 It was something In the way you blinked your eyes Or contorted your face Or moved your lips Something in how Your voice fluctuated On the phone When you set up the time It had to do With that time when your phone Shattered on the ground Made you swear This or that Every reason together or none at all Is why You're still waiting One look or listen The assumptions started falling Involuntary verdicts Over everything you are It was something
In the way you blinked your eyes
Or contorted your face
Or moved your lips

Something in how
Your voice fluctuated
On the phone
When you set up the time

It had to do
With that time when your phone
Shattered on the ground
Made you swear

This or that
Every reason together or none at all
Is why
You’re still waiting

One look or listen
The assumptions started falling
Involuntary verdicts
Over everything you are

Like or Dislike: Thumb up Thumb down +1

]]> By: mwright9 http://dailypoetryclub.com/hello-world/comment-page-1/#comment-5 mwright9 Sat, 19 Sep 2009 22:57:49 +0000 http:/?p=1#comment-5 Ball rolling quickly Bounce, bounce, kick it flies in air, Caught and I am out. Ball rolling quickly
Bounce, bounce, kick it flies in air,
Caught and I am out.

Like or Dislike: Thumb up Thumb down 0

]]> By: Tristan http://dailypoetryclub.com/hello-world/comment-page-1/#comment-4 Tristan Sat, 19 Sep 2009 22:23:41 +0000 http:/?p=1#comment-4 A mislaid word Is to prose Like an errant stroke of paint On Mona Lisa’s nose. A mislaid word
Is to prose
Like an errant stroke of paint
On Mona Lisa’s nose.

Like or Dislike: Thumb up Thumb down +12

]]>