Comments on: 2/2/10: Clean http://dailypoetryclub.com/2210-clean/ A poem a day keeps the mind at play. Wed, 28 Jul 2010 14:35:33 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: Russell http://dailypoetryclub.com/2210-clean/comment-page-1/#comment-1061 Russell Wed, 03 Feb 2010 06:29:21 +0000 http://dailypoetryclub.com/?p=524#comment-1061 the lady next door struggles with the fallen leaves. he drops his big load, strides forward with a smile and takes her wire rake. minutes pass, the leaves are bagged and problems he bore were blown away in the time pestering no more the lady next door
struggles with the fallen leaves.
he drops his big load,
strides forward with a smile
and takes her wire rake.
minutes pass, the leaves are bagged
and problems he bore
were blown away in the time
pestering no more

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]]> By: deepgreen http://dailypoetryclub.com/2210-clean/comment-page-1/#comment-1060 deepgreen Wed, 03 Feb 2010 01:18:44 +0000 http://dailypoetryclub.com/?p=524#comment-1060 the salt is everywhere in my eyes and mouth and hair I smell like the water the sand the birds nature Back to my beach house I scrub I drench I disinfect And watch the sun sink in the waves out of sight I am clean the salt is everywhere
in my eyes
and mouth
and hair
I smell like the water
the sand
the birds
nature
Back to my beach house
I scrub
I drench
I disinfect
And watch the sun sink
in the waves
out of sight
I am clean

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]]> By: Meryl http://dailypoetryclub.com/2210-clean/comment-page-1/#comment-1059 Meryl Tue, 02 Feb 2010 22:57:34 +0000 http://dailypoetryclub.com/?p=524#comment-1059 Stop playing; Just say it. It's time To come clean. Stop playing;
Just say it.
It’s time
To come clean.

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]]> By: Jillian http://dailypoetryclub.com/2210-clean/comment-page-1/#comment-1058 Jillian Tue, 02 Feb 2010 20:55:36 +0000 http://dailypoetryclub.com/?p=524#comment-1058 The feel of the warm water encompasses you completely, filling your entire soul with a burning fire. As the peace and comfort within begins to grow, you realize you are spotless, wholesome, clean, and pure. The feel of the warm water encompasses you completely,
filling your entire soul with a burning fire.
As the peace and comfort within begins to grow,
you realize you are spotless, wholesome, clean, and pure.

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]]> By: Tristan http://dailypoetryclub.com/2210-clean/comment-page-1/#comment-1057 Tristan Tue, 02 Feb 2010 18:37:50 +0000 http://dailypoetryclub.com/?p=524#comment-1057 I scrub and I scrub, spending hours, days, weeks in the tub. I've grown accustomed to the heat and the fog; I'm physically, spiritually, mentally, and emotionally waterlogged. I scrub and I scrub,
spending hours, days, weeks in the tub.
I’ve grown accustomed to the heat and the fog;
I’m physically, spiritually, mentally, and emotionally waterlogged.

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]]> By: Sorgie http://dailypoetryclub.com/2210-clean/comment-page-1/#comment-1056 Sorgie Tue, 02 Feb 2010 14:33:35 +0000 http://dailypoetryclub.com/?p=524#comment-1056 It would be so refreshing to dust the corners vacuum the rug of of it's fuzz sort through the drawers deciding what to keep, what can be thrown away to set shelves right find the missing sock and empty out the garbage bin in my mind It would be so refreshing
to dust the corners
vacuum the rug of of it’s fuzz
sort through the drawers
deciding what to keep, what can be thrown away
to set shelves right
find the missing sock
and empty out the garbage bin
in my mind

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]]> By: jraywelch http://dailypoetryclub.com/2210-clean/comment-page-1/#comment-1055 jraywelch Tue, 02 Feb 2010 07:33:16 +0000 http://dailypoetryclub.com/?p=524#comment-1055 Sleep never felt so good and clothes never fit so perfect as when you are clean. Sleep never felt so good
and clothes never fit so perfect
as when you are clean.

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