Comments on: 2/1/10: Saddest thing you can think of

By: Nicole_marie_montgomery2

Nicole_marie_montgomery2 — Fri, 05 Feb 2010 18:42:14 +0000

When I cry Tears roll down my cheack burried in my hands lie my tear stricked face i yell to the sky why me just a simple question I ask again and scream to the sky why me lord why do i cry

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By: Jennaay

Jennaay — Tue, 02 Feb 2010 06:07:32 +0000

The excitement of jumping into a lake naked
is quickly countered when the car won’t start.

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By: Tristan

Tristan — Tue, 02 Feb 2010 05:58:03 +0000

Everyone you love,
if you couldn’t tell,
made it to heaven.
Welcome to hell.

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By: Angela

Angela — Tue, 02 Feb 2010 03:57:41 +0000

unbearably so
has this endearing endurement go.

distances trespassed
then can i barely grasp

a glimpse
a hold
my hands gone cold.

traces of patience passed
desperately i clasp
on to shrinking dreams
they are reality’s edges and seams
graciously,
solace beas
upon my weary head
and until- all has been done and said.

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By: SBgiselle

SBgiselle — Tue, 02 Feb 2010 02:30:07 +0000

writer’s block

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By: deepgreen

deepgreen — Tue, 02 Feb 2010 02:28:46 +0000

A wasted night
Full of facts and figures
Is not justified
By the “F” of the paper

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By: Sorgie

Sorgie — Mon, 01 Feb 2010 23:31:58 +0000

building bridges
slowly, carefully,
paying attention
to the craftsmanship
bridges that go to places
full of people

and then
with the wrong words
you set them alight

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By: Russell

Russell — Mon, 01 Feb 2010 19:34:01 +0000

playing a matching card game
and the second card you flip
looks nothing like the first

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