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	<title>Comments on: 1/30/10: Freebie!</title>
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	<description>A poem a day keeps the mind at play.</description>
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		<title>By: Meryl</title>
		<link>http://dailypoetryclub.com/13010-freebie/comment-page-1/#comment-1043</link>
		<dc:creator>Meryl</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 31 Jan 2010 08:53:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I found myself walking,
Wandering,
Floating,
Dancing on a path unanticipated.
Along the course I found a friend
Who joined in my roaming.

With him I shared a book
And he warmly gave his to me.
Through the pages of each other’s books we peered 
And learned and thought and lived.
The world became ours. And the hours were calm.

The man was sincere
For his music was pure and clear as glass.
He had a heart of gold
For he behaved as if I were delicately encased in it.
He was fearless
For never did he shelter his sweet song.

With pleasure we lived in each other’s books.
With deep simplicity we enjoyed the path.

Now I stand on that same course, which has just begun to turn.
I consider dancing longer, but the movement dulls.
And the road beneath feels inconsistent with my feet’s proclivity.
Here I am -standing,
Thinking,
Wondering,
Deciding to dance no further on the path he shared with me.

I impart his book to him 
And my book is returned to me.
As I finger through familiar pages, I recognize alterations.
Once secluded pages are now highlighted in vivid yellow.
I discover things about my own book which had once been misplaced.

His music continues unshaken;
The exceptionally genuine melody carries on.
And as I back away ever gently
I hope his book, like mine, is better in some way
Because we had the chance to skim through it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I found myself walking,<br />
Wandering,<br />
Floating,<br />
Dancing on a path unanticipated.<br />
Along the course I found a friend<br />
Who joined in my roaming.</p>
<p>With him I shared a book<br />
And he warmly gave his to me.<br />
Through the pages of each other’s books we peered<br />
And learned and thought and lived.<br />
The world became ours. And the hours were calm.</p>
<p>The man was sincere<br />
For his music was pure and clear as glass.<br />
He had a heart of gold<br />
For he behaved as if I were delicately encased in it.<br />
He was fearless<br />
For never did he shelter his sweet song.</p>
<p>With pleasure we lived in each other’s books.<br />
With deep simplicity we enjoyed the path.</p>
<p>Now I stand on that same course, which has just begun to turn.<br />
I consider dancing longer, but the movement dulls.<br />
And the road beneath feels inconsistent with my feet’s proclivity.<br />
Here I am -standing,<br />
Thinking,<br />
Wondering,<br />
Deciding to dance no further on the path he shared with me.</p>
<p>I impart his book to him<br />
And my book is returned to me.<br />
As I finger through familiar pages, I recognize alterations.<br />
Once secluded pages are now highlighted in vivid yellow.<br />
I discover things about my own book which had once been misplaced.</p>
<p>His music continues unshaken;<br />
The exceptionally genuine melody carries on.<br />
And as I back away ever gently<br />
I hope his book, like mine, is better in some way<br />
Because we had the chance to skim through it.</p>
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		<title>By: Russell</title>
		<link>http://dailypoetryclub.com/13010-freebie/comment-page-1/#comment-1042</link>
		<dc:creator>Russell</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 31 Jan 2010 07:56:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>the tin foil wrapping
protects its candy cargo
only to be trashed</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>the tin foil wrapping<br />
protects its candy cargo<br />
only to be trashed</p>
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		<title>By: Tristan</title>
		<link>http://dailypoetryclub.com/13010-freebie/comment-page-1/#comment-1039</link>
		<dc:creator>Tristan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 31 Jan 2010 03:12:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Sometimes I don&#039;t want to write a poem
but I promised myself I would,
and so I end up writing crap like this
and it&#039;s no good.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sometimes I don&#8217;t want to write a poem<br />
but I promised myself I would,<br />
and so I end up writing crap like this<br />
and it&#8217;s no good.</p>
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		<title>By: TREVOR</title>
		<link>http://dailypoetryclub.com/13010-freebie/comment-page-1/#comment-1036</link>
		<dc:creator>TREVOR</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 31 Jan 2010 01:55:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>At the moment
I can think
Of nothing 
Better
Than world peace
Except perhaps
A hot place
Of Chicken Fried Rice
Or mabye
Some curly fries
Yes.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>At the moment<br />
I can think<br />
Of nothing<br />
Better<br />
Than world peace<br />
Except perhaps<br />
A hot place<br />
Of Chicken Fried Rice<br />
Or mabye<br />
Some curly fries<br />
Yes.</p>
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		<title>By: Jonahh</title>
		<link>http://dailypoetryclub.com/13010-freebie/comment-page-1/#comment-1035</link>
		<dc:creator>Jonahh</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 31 Jan 2010 00:49:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>THE LOST ITEM

there is always solitude
in the centre of the road
crossing over shades and
tones and
magnitudes of light

sometimes there is solitude
in the stream of thoughts
crossing over dreams and
age and
magnitudes of gloom

there is never solitude
on the ways i walk alone
crossing over fear and
loss and
magnitudes of hope</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>THE LOST ITEM</p>
<p>there is always solitude<br />
in the centre of the road<br />
crossing over shades and<br />
tones and<br />
magnitudes of light</p>
<p>sometimes there is solitude<br />
in the stream of thoughts<br />
crossing over dreams and<br />
age and<br />
magnitudes of gloom</p>
<p>there is never solitude<br />
on the ways i walk alone<br />
crossing over fear and<br />
loss and<br />
magnitudes of hope</p>
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		<title>By: SBgiselle</title>
		<link>http://dailypoetryclub.com/13010-freebie/comment-page-1/#comment-1034</link>
		<dc:creator>SBgiselle</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 31 Jan 2010 00:28:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&quot;whatever&quot; is what you say
When you can&#039;t describe how you feel
&quot;whatever&quot; is what he muttered
When losing became real
&quot;whatever&quot; filled the place 
of the words she longed to speak
When all her explanations 
Became pointless and weak
&quot;whatever&quot; can fix and create problems
Like no other word
whatever.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;whatever&#8221; is what you say<br />
When you can&#8217;t describe how you feel<br />
&#8220;whatever&#8221; is what he muttered<br />
When losing became real<br />
&#8220;whatever&#8221; filled the place<br />
of the words she longed to speak<br />
When all her explanations<br />
Became pointless and weak<br />
&#8220;whatever&#8221; can fix and create problems<br />
Like no other word<br />
whatever.</p>
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		<title>By: deepgreen</title>
		<link>http://dailypoetryclub.com/13010-freebie/comment-page-1/#comment-1033</link>
		<dc:creator>deepgreen</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 30 Jan 2010 22:01:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Top of the world 
Becomes true reality
As we stand 
hand in hand
looking over the valley</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Top of the world<br />
Becomes true reality<br />
As we stand<br />
hand in hand<br />
looking over the valley</p>
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