Comments on: 1/29/10: Walks

By: TREVOR

TREVOR — Sun, 31 Jan 2010 01:57:49 +0000

Poop has once again disturbed my evening stroll.

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By: Tristan

Tristan — Sat, 30 Jan 2010 02:00:31 +0000

A walk with a girl
is always either the end
or the beginning.

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By: Sorgie

Sorgie — Sat, 30 Jan 2010 01:57:48 +0000

In groups they march
Pepper flakes over the open white
Theirs is the only movement
Beside the snow itself

Huddled down together
Packed in for warmth
Perhaps the cold
is why they choose to walk

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By: Russell

Russell — Sat, 30 Jan 2010 01:48:51 +0000

I trod up the sidewalk
on my way to school
and the whole time wishing
my feet were rockets
and I could blast straight off
at top speed, high and
up to the clouds, swishing
by trees and birds,
to then land in no time
in my morning class,
smile at the teacher
and have him wonder
at the smoke from my feet.

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By: kshaw10

kshaw10 — Fri, 29 Jan 2010 18:44:15 +0000

There he walks, holding your hand.
You may not see him but in time you will understand
He guides you gently down the path that was meant for you
Through the grass glistened with morning dew

As you walk in the darkness he lights the way
protects you from danger all through the day
You go through life never truly knowing
but one day you’ll be in the heavens glowing..

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