Comments on: 1/20/10: Pressure http://dailypoetryclub.com/12010-pressure/ A poem a day keeps the mind at play. Wed, 28 Jul 2010 14:35:33 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: Tristan http://dailypoetryclub.com/12010-pressure/comment-page-1/#comment-987 Tristan Thu, 21 Jan 2010 06:46:38 +0000 http://dailypoetryclub.com/?p=491#comment-987 The poet sits down to write, the poet begins to think, under pressure to convert his heart and thoughts to ink. Running out of time, he sacrifices heart, choosing cleverness and rhyme over pure and passionate art. The poet sits down to write,
the poet begins to think,
under pressure to convert
his heart and thoughts to ink.

Running out of time,
he sacrifices heart,
choosing cleverness and rhyme
over pure and passionate art.

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]]> By: Meryl http://dailypoetryclub.com/12010-pressure/comment-page-1/#comment-986 Meryl Thu, 21 Jan 2010 06:32:35 +0000 http://dailypoetryclub.com/?p=491#comment-986 I pace on the floor- just can't do it. Too much burden- Can't entertain the ever patient pressure. I pace on the floor-
just can’t do it.
Too much burden-
Can’t entertain
the ever patient pressure.

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]]> By: Sorgie http://dailypoetryclub.com/12010-pressure/comment-page-1/#comment-985 Sorgie Wed, 20 Jan 2010 23:42:17 +0000 http://dailypoetryclub.com/?p=491#comment-985 Lock down the lid, set the dial Inside are potatoes standing guard around the beef against carrots and onions but they'll soften as will the other vegetables and only the meat will get tougher Lock down the lid,
set the dial

Inside are potatoes
standing guard around the beef
against carrots and onions

but they’ll soften
as will the other vegetables
and only the meat will get tougher

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]]> By: Russell http://dailypoetryclub.com/12010-pressure/comment-page-1/#comment-984 Russell Wed, 20 Jan 2010 19:47:58 +0000 http://dailypoetryclub.com/?p=491#comment-984 The easy-scroll section on the right side of my track pad wasn't working. I used my finger and applied more pressure to try and make it work, but now it's not only the track pad that's broken. The easy-scroll section
on the right side of my track pad
wasn’t working.
I used my finger
and applied more pressure
to try and make it work,
but now it’s not only the track pad
that’s broken.

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