Comments on: 1/11/10: Sweet http://dailypoetryclub.com/11110-sweet/ A poem a day keeps the mind at play. Thu, 09 Sep 2010 19:43:34 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: Russell http://dailypoetryclub.com/11110-sweet/comment-page-1/#comment-935 Russell Tue, 12 Jan 2010 04:27:39 +0000 http://dailypoetryclub.com/?p=444#comment-935 it is good at first it makes your body bitter if you have too much it is good at first
it makes your body bitter
if you have too much

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]]> By: Angela http://dailypoetryclub.com/11110-sweet/comment-page-1/#comment-934 Angela Tue, 12 Jan 2010 04:15:13 +0000 http://dailypoetryclub.com/?p=444#comment-934 I have yet to meet the one who makes my breath weak and my heart sing loving darling and meek. obsessivley compulsively and freakishly neat. He is my sickeningly sweet geek. I have yet to meet
the one
who makes my breath
weak and
my heart
sing
loving
darling
and meek.
obsessivley
compulsively and freakishly neat.
He is
my sickeningly sweet
geek.

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]]> By: Tristan http://dailypoetryclub.com/11110-sweet/comment-page-1/#comment-933 Tristan Tue, 12 Jan 2010 01:18:25 +0000 http://dailypoetryclub.com/?p=444#comment-933 Preach to me the ways of your world, Convert me to your gospel, Sneak me into your heaven, Help me commit sweet heresy. Preach to me the ways of your world,
Convert me to your gospel,
Sneak me into your heaven,
Help me commit sweet heresy.

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